The General stirred uneasily in his
seat. He hated these briefings. He hated the people at the briefings. He hated what the people at the briefings had
to say. He just hated it all.
There were six of them in
total. The heads of Australia’s two
intelligence services – ASIO and ASIS.
The Chief of the Defence Forces.
The Minister for Defence & Intelligence. The Prime Minister’s Security Advisor, and
The General. No one else in the
government was aware that these meetings even occurred such was the sensitivity
of the information discussed. Not even
the Prime Minister was privy to all the information. None of those present would have it any other
way.
Their briefings were held every week
without fail. If someone was absent –
not matter where in the world they were – they were included by either secure
phone line or data uplink. The briefings
were never missed.
Today,
the briefing was dealing with a new terrorist threat that Australia simply was
not prepared for. Indeed, when The
General had first been made privy to the sensitive information sitting in front
of him some six months ago, he laughed so hard he had almost urinated in his
uniform. When he had been fully briefed,
the idea of the type of terrorist being presented in the dossier seemed simply
unbelievable. The General believed in
the power of a tank. The General
believed in the ability of Australian Troops to get in and get the job done. The General believed if nothing else worked –
bomb the bastards. The General did not
believe in genetically diverged humans.
The General had a very low tolerance for bullshit, and the dossier in
front of him had initially been very much what The General would define as a
lump of waste requiring shovels.
But then he had met them.
He would never have believed
it. Even when they were standing in
front of him, the soldier in him demanded proof. And proof they had provided. It had taken The General exactly one whole
bottle of Bundaberg Rum Red to settle his nerves from the displays of their
“abilities”. Now, he was being told that
a similar group of individuals, with similar abilities, were planning a
terrorist strike somewhere in his great country. To say he was pissed was akin to saying a
tsunami was a teeny wave.
“Problem, Harold?” The director of ASIS asked of The General.
The General shifted in his seat
before replying. When he did it was with
the usual gruffness that only reinforced the stereotypical reputation he
had. Truth be told, he liked the
reputation. It made people pause. It promoted fear and respect in his
soldiers. It also pissed off the
intelligence types. And that brought a
crooked smile to his face. “Of course I
have a bloody problem!” He began in a
shout that would rapidly evolve to a bellow.
The room had no carpet and The General liked how the acoustics leant
themselves to his type of communication.
“Your friggin’ Intelligence mob is supposed to fix these things. What the bloody hell do you need my help for?”
The Director of ASIS cocked an
eyebrow. He liked and respected The
General, but he admitted he was a pain in the arse of the first order. The Director, however, was possessed of a
much more refined civility and thus did not bellow, even when he wanted to.
“We are doing all we can. But unfortunately, this type of strike is not
something that we alone can prevent. You
have assets all over that part of Queensland and we need you to advise them of
the threat. We need more eyes.”
The General laughed. It bounced around the room. “More eyes?
You’ve got satellites. You’ve got
access to more satellites from our
friends. Why the hell should my people
be moved from where they are? Give me
one good bloody reason and I’ll do it.”
The General punctuated the remark with a stabbing motion in the air. A honeyed voice from behind him answered.
“Because, if your assets aren’t made
aware, then they could very well be the first victims of a threat that you
didn’t want them to be alerted to.”
The General cringed inwardly, even
as the clicking of her heels announced the arrival of she whom The General
referred to as “Bitch”. She was, in
actuality, the Director of the organization that was responsible for the
individuals who had so spooked The General.
She was also a woman who carried a very big stick – and was not afraid
to wield it, with devastating force.
When she arrived at the conference
table, the ASIS Director stood and politely kissed her cheek in greeting. The two were old colleagues from many years
ago and he valued and trusted her input.
The General reluctantly respected her.
She was a tough woman with access to data that she would readily share
without price. However, she also was a
determined leader who would always strive to get her own way. She spoke in her usual authoritative and
business like tone that always raised The General’s hackles.
“Harold. I understand the inconvenience from a
logistics stand point. But you currently
have six units in the catchment zone of this threat. I’ve made condolence calls to the families of
the fallen and would prefer not to see you do any more than necessary. Considering the losses in Iraq and
Afghanistan I am sure you have made quite enough calls already.”
The General grunted in
response. Unfortunately, she was right.
“Fine.” He conceded none too graciously. “You tell me where and when and I’ll get them
moving.”
She smiled a genuine smile of
appreciation. That was the other thing
The General hated; she was actually appreciative of efforts expended on her
behalf. God how he longed for the days
when you stuck it to the intelligence agencies.
The above excerpt is from a work written by Damien Timms and is protected by International Copyright lodged in Australia and the USA and may not be reproduced in part or whole without the written permission of the author.
1 comment:
Damien,
Glad to receive my next course. If your entire novel is as well put together as these first four excerpts, while knowing it isn't complete, I would expect it is a very interesting and enjoyable read.
I want to tell you to keep at it because I think it will be worth it if these are anything to go by. I know you want feedback and this is a great way to get some but don't let the ideas of others influence too much that which is your personal touch. You have an obvious style so try and be true to it.
Your writing is good, precise, simplistic and to the point. It is easy to read and sends the mind on great imaginative journeys. It is also good that you are sticking to traditional english and spelling, giving it a quality not seen too often these days on the Internet.
Keep up the good work.
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